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The colon’s job is to introduce something: a list, a long quotation, an explanatory phrase, or a phrase (a group of words) to which you wish to draw attention. Standard Sentences I teach several Shakespeare-related classes: Shakespeare and Film, Shakespeare, and Modern Shakespearean Fiction. Shakespeare coined one of my favorite expressions: “Sweet are the uses of adversity.” When cooking biscuits, remember one thing above all: check the oven frequently. I hope you share my opinion of the colon: it’s exciting! None of the above may surprise you, but would you have considered the following use of the colon nonstandard? Nonstandard The objectives of this course include: organization and coherence in writing, advanced critical thinking skills, and mastery of editing skills. It is not standard written English. You may be thinking, “But the colon precedes a list!” True, but take a look at the following three sentences that are standard written English. Standard Sentences a. The objectives of this course are organization and coherence in writing, advanced critical thinking skills, and mastery of editing skills. b. The objectives of this course include organization and coherence in writing, advanced critical thinking skills, and mastery of editing skills. c. The objectives of this course include the following: organization and coherence in writing, advanced critical thinking skills, and mastery of editing skills. The reason the colon is standard in the last example is that the first chunk of the sentence (“The objectives of this course include the following”) could stand by itself as a sentence, whereas “The objectives of this course include” could not since we’re waiting for a noun to appear right away after the verb “include” so it cannot stand independently“include.” The chunk that could be a sentence (although after a pause we’d still expect some information of what “the following” is ) is called an independent clause. Here’s Here, then, is the rule: A colon is always preceded by an independent clause.
Standard Sentences In preparing to teach my course on Shakespeare and film, I watched Strange Brew, Strange Illusion, and A Midwinter’s Tale. I studied many things, including Shakespeare’s comedies, his histories, and his tragedies. The things I appreciate about Shakespeare are his intelligence, his swordsmanship, and his gigantic forehead. In the sentences earlier, it would be incorrect to place a colon after “watched,” “including,” or “are” because what comes before those words could not have stood independently. |
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