Agreement Circle the correct word. 1. - Either Dr. Jones or his many talented TAs (remind / reminds) the students
to turn - to turn in their papers online.
2. - The group of students (was / were) relieved to finish the First Year
Experience sessions- Experience sessions.
3. - There (is / are) a bucket of cookies waiting in your room for you.
4. - None of the puppies (is / are) allowed to live on campus.
5. - Everybody from the Bethel soccer team (is / are) welcome to attend
our breakout - our breakout chapel.
Dangling, Misplaced, and Squinting Modifiers Revise the following sentences so that the modifiers make sense and refer to the
correct word or phrase. Note: There are other ways to fix the erroneous modifiers; these are some suggested ways. 1. - While I walked to class, my homework sat forgotten on my bed.
2. - The student who was talking disappeared quickly behind a book.
3. - The
mother’s - mother's bed was full of children and pets who were scared to death during
- the
big thunderstorm- big thunderstorm.
4. - The book that he needed
to read - for his presentation was on the shelf.
5. - Totally thrilled, Will Smith accepted the Oscar.
Fragmentary Sentences Revise the following sentences so that there are no fragments among them. 1. Note: There are other ways to fix the fragments; these are some suggested ways. - As many people walked to chapel, the people with the cameras took
their picture- their picture.
2. - Dr. Jones is an understanding teacher because he was once a student.
Guide to Editing Essentials 91 3. - The group of friends drove to the restaurant: time to eat.
4. - Frodo stood up and volunteered to take the ring to Mordor, his voice small
but determined- but determined.
5. - The ice cream shop reopened. It now offers more flavors.
Run-on Fused Sentences Revise the following run-on fused (also known as “fused”) sentences. 1. “run-on”) sentences. Note: There are other ways to fix the fused sentences; these are some suggested ways. - She has to buy a new computer
; - because her hard drive crashed with all of her files on it.
2. - There are fruit flies everywhere. Please wash your dishes.
3. - Aslan is not a tame lion, but he is good.
4. - Dr. Jones’ TA took his humor lit class last spring. His new TA was in that
class as - class as well.
5. - Our teacher accidentally called Fall Break “Spring Break” in the syllabus;
I noticed - I noticed it this afternoon when I was doing my homework.
Adjectives/Adverbs Circle the appropriate word in parentheses. 1. - I think that the essay test that Dr. Jones gave went (real / really) (good / well).
2. - Of the two novels, I think that To Kill a Mockingbird is (better / best).
3. - It is difficult to know which of the many college majors is the (better / best)
- choice.
4. - It is (good / well) for students to decide on a major eventually.
5. - Last week, the soup tasted (good / well).
6. - The shaggy dog needed his furry coat trimmed (bad / badly).
7. - The chemistry experiment to make artificial chocolate failed (bad / badly).
Guide to Editing Essentials 92 8. - The artificial chocolate made by the chemistry experiment tasted (bad /
badly- badly).
9. - Like a (real / really) bad dream come true, that embarrassing moment
was
- was (real / really).
10. - The stew that boiled over onto the burner smelled (bad / badly) to the
- household.
Case Circle the appropriate word in parentheses. Case Circle the appropriate word in parentheses. 1. - He gave the handouts to Tiffany, Sander, and (I / me).
2. - (We / Us) Northwestern students must make a good impression on
- prospective students.
3. - (He / Him) and the detective couldn’t believe who the culprit was.
4. - No one was more surprised than (I / me)!
5. - The maroon minivan belongs to (I / me).
6. - The conversation is between you and (I / me).
7. - My relatives from Vietnam are coming to visit (I / me) in Minnesota.
8. - My best friend never goes anywhere without (I / me / myself).
9. - The prize was given to (she / her) last year.
10. - This year, the prize was given to (us / we) juniors.
11. - Jack and (I / me) went to Cub so I could buy food and he could buy a rose
for his - for his first date.
12. - I am very grateful for (him / he / his) discovering the treasure.
13. - Bethel students and (we / us) are competing in this weekend’s
volleyball tournament- volleyball tournament.
Guide to Editing Essentials 93 14. - (Us / Our / We) competing with one another in a friendly manner is always
- good fun.
15. - Her neighbor can get around easier than (she / her).
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